Sunday, February 12, 2012

Web Activity 5 - The Truth About Smoking

I wanted to keep my message the main thing. I believe this is effective and gets the point across. The image complements the text, and the text does not overwhelm the image. I know that I wouldn't take time to read five different facts about smoking, so why should I expect others to?

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  1. Your message is really creative and clean. It is not cluttered with any unnecessary distractions. I like the picture you chose and the words really pop on your black background.

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  2. I agree, Stephen. The original image was too wordy. Your layout is clean and easy to read quickly.

    The only suggestion I have is to somehow obscure the edges of the photo against the black background of the poster. You might want to try using the paint bucket to dump pure black into the 'black' areas of the photo.

    Matt

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  3. Nice clean solution to the problem. Good contrast, strong composition, effective use of color.

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