Hi Janie, you've got a nice color scheme that's pleasing. The green on white and blue accent is a good choice. You seem to segment the information well using bullets and/or numbers too. For the first side, I like the use of the icons for communication. That column is great with all the information there. Your title fits nicely with the picture too. On the left side of the first image you have some white space that probably needs to be space a little more with the text. It feels bunched up in the middle.
The second image - on the left column, try moving the left aligned text away from the edge more. It is too close I think. The middle column is a nice contrast with the green background and M2 logo. The partnership information seems like a lot of words together for me. I wonder if that could be broken up too, such as making a heading of "Middle Matters is a partnership between:" and then center the rest of the sponsors. This could space it out a bit. The right column has a lot of words too. I think you could paraphrase these even more by leaving out the "HCPS will..." and just put the very essential words in. Also, your 1) goal is indented (which looks nice) but the others are not. This look unintended though.
Hi Janie, you've got a nice color scheme that's pleasing. The green on white and blue accent is a good choice. You seem to segment the information well using bullets and/or numbers too. For the first side, I like the use of the icons for communication. That column is great with all the information there. Your title fits nicely with the picture too. On the left side of the first image you have some white space that probably needs to be space a little more with the text. It feels bunched up in the middle.
ReplyDeleteThe second image - on the left column, try moving the left aligned text away from the edge more. It is too close I think. The middle column is a nice contrast with the green background and M2 logo. The partnership information seems like a lot of words together for me. I wonder if that could be broken up too, such as making a heading of "Middle Matters is a partnership between:" and then center the rest of the sponsors. This could space it out a bit. The right column has a lot of words too. I think you could paraphrase these even more by leaving out the "HCPS will..." and just put the very essential words in. Also, your 1) goal is indented (which looks nice) but the others are not. This look unintended though.