This is the first draft of my brochure. I had a little trouble deciding what information to include, but I think I got the most important parts. Let me know what you think!
Your brochure blends quite well with your poster! Good job! I think you're right about the information. You probably want to start shortening the information. There is a lot to read and it looks imposing too, but it is segmented appropriately. I think your headings work well with the light red background and the numbers on the second side. Your images are good too. On the "recruits" section, you may want to offset the two images such as separating them or overlapping them. The alignment looks less interesting to me than an overlay might. Also, on the "goals" column you may want to put a white background like you did with the other columns. The blue line is distracting behind the text. Otherwise your 'paper' background really does add to the overall effect.
I really like the consistency between your poster and brochure! I agree with Eric about shortening the information, it is a lot to read so paraphrasing even more if possible would work great! I would also suggest putting borders on your pictures if there aren't already (it's hard for me to tell). Lastly, I agree with Eric again in that if you put a white background on the "Goals" section of your brochure, it would bring in more consistency and be easier to read. Overall, great job! :)
Your brochure blends quite well with your poster! Good job! I think you're right about the information. You probably want to start shortening the information. There is a lot to read and it looks imposing too, but it is segmented appropriately. I think your headings work well with the light red background and the numbers on the second side. Your images are good too. On the "recruits" section, you may want to offset the two images such as separating them or overlapping them. The alignment looks less interesting to me than an overlay might. Also, on the "goals" column you may want to put a white background like you did with the other columns. The blue line is distracting behind the text. Otherwise your 'paper' background really does add to the overall effect.
ReplyDeleteI really like the consistency between your poster and brochure! I agree with Eric about shortening the information, it is a lot to read so paraphrasing even more if possible would work great! I would also suggest putting borders on your pictures if there aren't already (it's hard for me to tell). Lastly, I agree with Eric again in that if you put a white background on the "Goals" section of your brochure, it would bring in more consistency and be easier to read. Overall, great job! :)
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