Monday, April 8, 2013
Full Draft of Picture Book
I had only posted a couple of slides for my draft on Friday along with my storyboard; here is the rest of my book. I am still working on a couple small things. Feedback is appreciated! (NOTE: I forgot to take a picture of a pizza cutter for the utensils page; I will be adding that later today)
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Wow, these look delicious!! I've never heard of them until now! You did a really great job of documenting each step within your photos so that viewers have no confusion. I think the way you alternate between placing your numbers in the top left and bottom right corners will work if you keep the alternation consistent. (Right now, both step 10 and 11 have the numbers in the bottom right corner.) I also think that keeping your text the same size throughout the book will help. Right now it looks like a few pages have smaller fonts than others. Also, you might want to consider leaving a wider margin around your pages--it looks like the numbers on the little square shapes touch the edges right now. Maybe having a little space around them would be nice. Awesome job though!
ReplyDeleteLooks delish! Can't wait to try these. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI do agree...they look delicious! I also noticed the difference in font size on some of the pages. Your pictures really do a nice job of giving the viewers a clear description of each step. One thing that I did notice was that some of your pictures overlap. Could you make them smaller so that they have a defined space? I really like what you have done so far!
ReplyDeleteWow this looks amazing, and easy!! I've never heard of these, but after reading through this I think I could easily make them. I love the pictures with the written directions. Some of your pictures look like they are a little close to the border, so you might just want to move them closer to the center.
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