I like where you're going with this, guys. I like that you have your Volkswagen car repeated both in the top logo and at the bottom of the page, in the grey circle. I don't quite understand, though, the purpose that the yellow antique car serves, but this could just be me totally missing the point. I like that you're trying to explain in the handout how students should attach their FP decals, and the enlarged view of the decal really helps. Also, at the bottom of the page, I don't think you need the words "thanks! Contact us with questions @" Just the phone number, email address, and website would suffice at the bottom I think. When people see that information, they know what it's for, so I think the "thanks! contact us..." is just redundant. Then, if you delete those extra words, could you center your grey car image at the bottom in between the email and website addresses? Just ideas!
I like where you're going with this, guys. I like that you have your Volkswagen car repeated both in the top logo and at the bottom of the page, in the grey circle. I don't quite understand, though, the purpose that the yellow antique car serves, but this could just be me totally missing the point. I like that you're trying to explain in the handout how students should attach their FP decals, and the enlarged view of the decal really helps. Also, at the bottom of the page, I don't think you need the words "thanks! Contact us with questions @" Just the phone number, email address, and website would suffice at the bottom I think. When people see that information, they know what it's for, so I think the "thanks! contact us..." is just redundant. Then, if you delete those extra words, could you center your grey car image at the bottom in between the email and website addresses? Just ideas!
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