Monday, June 20, 2011

Revised Brochure

I revised my brochure with some suggestions from Courtney. I def like the thought to change fonts. How is the color though? Is it too gold now vs too white before? Any feedback is appreciated.

3 comments:

  1. I think there is a little too much bright gold going on here! Maybe keep half of the panels as gold backgrounds and the other 3 as white? The gold might work better if you decrease the color saturation. I made my boxes less saturated, while still using the official JMU colors. I think that helps make the colors easier on the eyes as a background color.

    Also, I would align that check mark picture to the center of the column, instead of right aligning it.

    I hope this helps. I think the information you shared in this brochure is very informative and clear!

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  2. Nice Brochure! The picture on the second page under the Applying section looks a little crooked or off center...Also, I might use one color for the fonts...the different colors make the brochure look a little busy

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  3. I preferred the white over the gold. Maybe find a balance between using primarily white with colored boxes for some of the text.

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