This reminds me of something you would hang behind the counter in a store to let customers know what the shop has to offer. If that is the point, than you do a great job of it. If this were an advertisement that you were going to hang some place else, than it needs something to make me want to buy these cupcakes. The logo is still fantastic (though it is fuzzier than the rest of the poster for some reason). I guess I would need to know where you are placing this to really make more suggestions. If it in behind the counter it is great, it if is to draw in customers it needs something else besides the menu.
I agree with Andee, if the poster will not be displayed on "Wendy's Cakes' website, or within the physical store, then there needs to be some contact information and more enticing copy that gets the reader to this point. Also the logo is distorted and 'Flavors' is difficult to read. Otherwise I like your choice of colors, font type, and layout!
Good thought -yes, I did mean for it to be up in a store. I wanted it to be the steps for ordering custom cupcakes...things to think about / options to consider in the order needed. I didn't mean for it to be an advertisement or anything to draw people in to the business. I do think it could be sent out as information for interested people though.
I don't know why the logo is fuzzy...I'll have to play with it! Thanks for that feedback. I didn't see it when I looked at it during creation.
If this is for the store than I think the design works well. It does make the ordering process easier for customer but you may want something that lets people know...Build your perfect cupcake...Flavors is hard to read due to font, the v is odd looking. Good catch Becca.
This reminds me of something you would hang behind the counter in a store to let customers know what the shop has to offer. If that is the point, than you do a great job of it. If this were an advertisement that you were going to hang some place else, than it needs something to make me want to buy these cupcakes. The logo is still fantastic (though it is fuzzier than the rest of the poster for some reason). I guess I would need to know where you are placing this to really make more suggestions. If it in behind the counter it is great, it if is to draw in customers it needs something else besides the menu.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Andee, if the poster will not be displayed on "Wendy's Cakes' website, or within the physical store, then there needs to be some contact information and more enticing copy that gets the reader to this point. Also the logo is distorted and 'Flavors' is difficult to read. Otherwise I like your choice of colors, font type, and layout!
ReplyDeleteGood thought -yes, I did mean for it to be up in a store. I wanted it to be the steps for ordering custom cupcakes...things to think about / options to consider in the order needed. I didn't mean for it to be an advertisement or anything to draw people in to the business. I do think it could be sent out as information for interested people though.
ReplyDeleteI don't know why the logo is fuzzy...I'll have to play with it! Thanks for that feedback. I didn't see it when I looked at it during creation.
Oops -I forgot to ask about flavors...is it JUST flavors or is it all of them? Does it seem to be fuzzy or do you think it's the font?
ReplyDeleteIf this is for the store than I think the design works well. It does make the ordering process easier for customer but you may want something that lets people know...Build your perfect cupcake...Flavors is hard to read due to font, the v is odd looking. Good catch Becca.
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