Ooh, I like the apple and the image in the center. Love the background color as well. I think the text can be improved, though. I like that the It Matters matches the color of the apple, but does it fade too much against the background? The headline should probably be larger as well. Great first draft, Cherelle. Love the idea.
Love the concept! My suggestions would include making the photo larger inside the apple - also making all of the text larger. The contrast could be better making the text easier to read. Play with some different backgroud/text colors. Very nice!
I love your poster....it's a great start! The apple image is wonderful! I would work on making the text more appealing to the eye...make it POP! The white on the blue doesn't really stick out enough. Leave the apple image-it's great! Really try and focus on blue background and the white text...they sorta blend in together.
I think we are both in group 4 together so once I post mine I would love some feedback...thanks!!
I love the apple image, its grabs the attention of the viewer! I agree with making the text more appealing. I think making the font bigger would help, especially the first line. The light blue background is pretty, but it does clash with the white font. Maybe making the blue darker to add more contrast, or changing the font to a darker color. The question before the information is good, I think it should be a little bit bigger than the information so the reader wants to read on.
Cherelle, good concept. I agree with the others that you want to make your heading and picture inside the apple larger. If you do not want to change the color of the background, I suggest using a drop shadow under the text. The block of copy looks like it is flush right or centered? I would either make it flush left, or justify the text so that you have tidy margins on both sides of the text. Centered doesn't work.
Ooh, I like the apple and the image in the center. Love the background color as well. I think the text can be improved, though. I like that the It Matters matches the color of the apple, but does it fade too much against the background? The headline should probably be larger as well. Great first draft, Cherelle. Love the idea.
ReplyDeleteLove the concept! My suggestions would include making the photo larger inside the apple - also making all of the text larger. The contrast could be better making the text easier to read. Play with some different backgroud/text colors. Very nice!
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ReplyDeleteI love your poster....it's a great start! The apple image is wonderful! I would work on making the text more appealing to the eye...make it POP! The white on the blue doesn't really stick out enough. Leave the apple image-it's great! Really try and focus on blue background and the white text...they sorta blend in together.
I think we are both in group 4 together so once I post mine I would love some feedback...thanks!!
Jessica
Hi Cherelle,
ReplyDeleteI love the apple image, its grabs the attention of the viewer! I agree with making the text more appealing. I think making the font bigger would help, especially the first line. The light blue background is pretty, but it does clash with the white font. Maybe making the blue darker to add more contrast, or changing the font to a darker color. The question before the information is good, I think it should be a little bit bigger than the information so the reader wants to read on.
It looks really good!
-Sarah
Cherelle, good concept. I agree with the others that you want to make your heading and picture inside the apple larger. If you do not want to change the color of the background, I suggest using a drop shadow under the text. The block of copy looks like it is flush right or centered? I would either make it flush left, or justify the text so that you have tidy margins on both sides of the text. Centered doesn't work.
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