Wow, this is looking pretty cute! It definitely matches the look and feel of your logo. I'm wondering if filling the block with a color in "flavors and favorites" might help show the vanilla flavor. Perhaps a paler version of your pink? Also, The margins between your text and borders seem to be a little close, particularly at the bottom in "cupcakes" and "cakes" and at the sides in the "favorites" list of flavors around the "& strawberry" and "& chocolate." And now I'm pretty hungry for cupcakes...
First,I agree with Katie that I feel like I need some cake, now! This is looking really good and the more I see your logo the more I love it. The brochure is looking really good. As far as the cupcakes, I really like the visual of the dozen, 1/2 dozen. For the flavors/fillings, at least online, I find them a bit hard to see, so maybe making them a shade darker would help, especially for the vanilla , lemon, and strawberry flavors. The design is adorable, but I have a touch time seeing them. On the cakes section, it seems the alignment is off as the cakes go down the page. The words are aligned, but the circles and squares as they get larger seem to angle at a way that looks odd to me. It seems they should stay lined up, as they do on the right side of the page ( this only occurs on the left). Overall, this looks great and I hope we get samples :)
Wow, this is looking pretty cute! It definitely matches the look and feel of your logo. I'm wondering if filling the block with a color in "flavors and favorites" might help show the vanilla flavor. Perhaps a paler version of your pink? Also, The margins between your text and borders seem to be a little close, particularly at the bottom in "cupcakes" and "cakes" and at the sides in the "favorites" list of flavors around the "& strawberry" and "& chocolate." And now I'm pretty hungry for cupcakes...
ReplyDeleteFirst,I agree with Katie that I feel like I need some cake, now! This is looking really good and the more I see your logo the more I love it. The brochure is looking really good. As far as the cupcakes, I really like the visual of the dozen, 1/2 dozen. For the flavors/fillings, at least online, I find them a bit hard to see, so maybe making them a shade darker would help, especially for the vanilla , lemon, and strawberry flavors. The design is adorable, but I have a touch time seeing them. On the cakes section, it seems the alignment is off as the cakes go down the page. The words are aligned, but the circles and squares as they get larger seem to angle at a way that looks odd to me. It seems they should stay lined up, as they do on the right side of the page ( this only occurs on the left). Overall, this looks great and I hope we get samples :)
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