Very creative, Chervon! The slides seem out of focus - although that could be my new contacts - and some I would need to pause in order to read your information. I tried to read what you had written in the time you had the slide up, and it was difficult. I don't know if you intended for the slides to be able to be read entirely or not. Also, the blue on black for the credits makes them unreadable. I would slow down the movement of the slides, and change some of the font colors. I like your "blooming" theme - maybe a flower on each page would carry it through the presentation. In that same thought... the mission impossible slide seems out of place - maybe mission impossible could be a bud that hasn't opened yet. Just some thoughts for you - hope they help.
I agree with Renee's comments. My only other suggestion would be to lower the text on your slide highlighting what you have done with your experiences. The text seems to blend with the reflection of your heading. Great job, I really like the idea of being in bloom, and hope that you expand upon that throughout (maybe a picture of a blooming flower in the corner of each slide instead of "in bloom", just a thought!)
YouTube Resume, this is very unique Chervon.
ReplyDeleteVery creative, Chervon! The slides seem out of focus - although that could be my new contacts - and some I would need to pause in order to read your information. I tried to read what you had written in the time you had the slide up, and it was difficult. I don't know if you intended for the slides to be able to be read entirely or not. Also, the blue on black for the credits makes them unreadable. I would slow down the movement of the slides, and change some of the font colors. I like your "blooming" theme - maybe a flower on each page would carry it through the presentation. In that same thought... the mission impossible slide seems out of place - maybe mission impossible could be a bud that hasn't opened yet. Just some thoughts for you - hope they help.
ReplyDeleteThank you to both of you for the excellent feedback it is greatly appreciated. Thanks for the insight on the mission "possible" slide. Great idea!
DeleteI agree with Renee's comments. My only other suggestion would be to lower the text on your slide highlighting what you have done with your experiences. The text seems to blend with the reflection of your heading. Great job, I really like the idea of being in bloom, and hope that you expand upon that throughout (maybe a picture of a blooming flower in the corner of each slide instead of "in bloom", just a thought!)
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