The one thing I'd suggest is to format the "About the Design" page in the same manner as the rest of the slides. Positioning the title in the same place with the yellow under it and moving the Key to the right side of the page will create consistency and flow into the remaining slides and make it easy for viewers to flip back to reference the meanings of the abbreviations.
Your slide sets look good, clean design and consistent colors with your first projects. I would suggest alternating left and right alignment of pics and words throughout to create a more dynamic presentation flow.
Justin, Your slide set looks good so far. My favorite part is your banner, it looks great! One thing I noticed is that some of your headings (handout, visual resume, etc.) above the yellow lines do not consistently match up. It looks as though "Visual Resume" appropriately aligns with the yellow line below, but "Handout" is a little short of the end of the line, and "Multi-page project" goes over. I'm guessing you kept the same line length for the yellow line but maybe you could try adjusting it to fit the words rather than keeping the length consistent. This way the consistency will be with the way you see the line/heading interaction rather than having the line be the same length on each page. Very simple observation, yet it did catch my eye! I also agree with Caitlin in that the layout of the "about the design" slide should be more consistent with the feel/look of the other slides. I like it!
The "about the design" was the page that did catch my eye as well. Add the yellow line like your other pages and the right alignment of the text would add consistency. I like your design though! Your banner adds a great original feel, but yet your slides have a simple, but effective look.
Justin-
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The one thing I'd suggest is to format the "About the Design" page in the same manner as the rest of the slides. Positioning the title in the same place with the yellow under it and moving the Key to the right side of the page will create consistency and flow into the remaining slides and make it easy for viewers to flip back to reference the meanings of the abbreviations.
Great job!
Hey Justin,
ReplyDeleteYour slide sets look good, clean design and consistent colors with your first projects. I would suggest alternating left and right alignment of pics and words throughout to create a more dynamic presentation flow.
Keep up the good work
Justin, Your slide set looks good so far. My favorite part is your banner, it looks great! One thing I noticed is that some of your headings (handout, visual resume, etc.) above the yellow lines do not consistently match up. It looks as though "Visual Resume" appropriately aligns with the yellow line below, but "Handout" is a little short of the end of the line, and "Multi-page project" goes over. I'm guessing you kept the same line length for the yellow line but maybe you could try adjusting it to fit the words rather than keeping the length consistent. This way the consistency will be with the way you see the line/heading interaction rather than having the line be the same length on each page. Very simple observation, yet it did catch my eye! I also agree with Caitlin in that the layout of the "about the design" slide should be more consistent with the feel/look of the other slides. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThe "about the design" was the page that did catch my eye as well. Add the yellow line like your other pages and the right alignment of the text would add consistency. I like your design though! Your banner adds a great original feel, but yet your slides have a simple, but effective look.
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